Thursday, December 24, 2009

Iswar tomake

Tomake sompurno kore pabar age
Bhishon bhabna hoechhilo amar
obiroto onabrishtir majhe
shukno phata matir opor
prothom borshar podokheper moton
tomake paoa....
hridoy amar nachere ajike...
thik dhorechho- nijeke prokash kora-
nijer moton kore, hoini kokhono
rabindranath bachie diechhen--

Tomake sompurno kore paoar somoy
ki kore kokhon hothath holo
bujhte parini, kebol amar somosto
astitwa chapie, aro probol praner joar
jano sudhu gorve noi- amar somosto shorir
amon ki somosto chetona jure notun praner sonchar.
kosturir gondhe horinir pagol hoa
ar tomake onubhob korte korte amar pagol hoa
obikol ak

ato kichur majhe, mone korini kokhono-
harateo hoi. amar tomake paoa nitanto samoyik
karon kaler niome tumi harabei
praner joar gele prane bhatao ashe
majhsomudrer nistorongo gobhirota daoni tumi
tai mone hoi- tomake sompurno kore paoa
amar hoini kokhono.
nijer songe nijer khalae mete
bhebechhi tomake peyechhi- kintu
akta manush ar akta manushke paena kokhono-
tai

ami poraner sathe khelibo ajike moronokhela---

4 comments:

  1. Carry on oni.. u r doing just great...

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  2. hey thanks. it is written 4 somebody whose fiance has gone away without a word. she is through a bad phase. i tried to console her but failed. at last she told 2 write something 4 her. this is 4 her. i have never written a poem. believe me.

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  3. This is awesome...mamimoni. What about writing a poem for me???

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